Inspiration is back!
I was totally desperate the other day, completely sad, utterly disgusted that I could not come up with two lines... I took the bus to my painting class and who should show up on my shuffle playlist in my iPod? Nightwish!! My favorite band of all time!Dry spell cured! (And from now on, I'll write all the albums off my tax reports as inspirational material! LOL) And which song should show up but the one that had sparked the story for my novel The Lighthouse Keeper!
The song is called The Islander.
I'll let you (re)discover it as you read a brand-new, fresh-out-of-the-oven excerpt of my story. ^_^
Happy reading! :D
I'll let you (re)discover it as you read a brand-new, fresh-out-of-the-oven excerpt of my story. ^_^
Happy reading! :D
(And I'm going back to write some more! ^_^)
The Islander
(T. Holopainen, M. Hietala)
An old man by a seashore at the end of day
Gazes the horizon with sea winds in his face
Tempest-tossed island, seasons all the same
Anchorage unpainted and a ship without a name
Sea without a shore for the banished ones unheard
He lightens a beacon, light at the end of world
Showing the way, lighting hope in their hearts
The ones on their travels onward from afar
(Chorus)
This is for long-forgotten, light at the end of the world
Horizon crying the tears he left behind long ago
Horizon crying the tears he left behind long ago
The albatross is flying making him daydream
The time before he became one of the world's unseen
Princess in the tower, children in the field
Life's given him all, an island of the universe
Now his love's a memory, a ghost in the fog
He sets his sails one last time, saying farewell to the world
Anchor to the water, seabed far below
Grass still in his feet and a smile beneath his brow
(Chorus)
So long ago (x 2)
So long ago (x 2)
This is for long-forgotten, light at the end of the world
Horizon crying the tears he left behind so long ago
Horizon crying the tears he left behind so long ago
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(Novel excerpt)
PROLOGUE
The
old man squinted, studied the horizon. The icy wind bit his skin under his long
coat. He shivered and breathed some warmth into his hands, folding his hood
tighter. Unable to fight the cold, the old man grabbed the pole by his side and
pushed on it. His boat dragged on the freezing waters in silence. This eternal
silence. He had never known anything else.
A
thick fog rose from the river as always. He squinted once more, peering through
the darkness and the clouds until a bare shore appeared. Bare? He frowned.
One
more push on the pole brought him closer and any doubt he had vanished: the
shore was indeed bare of all presence. This was unprecedented. Something was
happening…
The
old man landed and with agility beyond his years jumped off of his little boat.
With long paces, he surveyed the white sand beach. Nothing. No one. Not a soul
in sight!
Even
the black waters were lacking their usual movements. Whatever was happening,
worst was to be expected.
The
old man was walking towards his small boat when a voice arose.
It
was the powerful voice of a chief, a creature trained in leading others. For
all the years he had worked for him, the old man could tell when his boss was
angry solely by hearing his voice: the calmer the voice, the worst the storm.
And right now, the voice almost sang; it was bad.
The
old man kneeled.
“He
has been found,” said the voice.
“Master?”
“What
were you thinking, old man? What demon possessed you?”
“I
beg for forgiveness, Master. I-I know I deserve whatever punishment comes my
way.”
“Indeed. But you shall wait your turn. I have more pressing matters.”
The
voice turned quiet. Even though the old man expected such a conversation for
quite a time now, he was uncertain what to do next. He waited until a shadow
appeared on the beach in front of him before moving again. Standing up, he
strode back to his boat, followed by the silhouette. The old man stood tall in
his boat. However, even if his strong waterman exterior showed no emotion, fear
had nested in his heart.
Was
there ever worse punishment than that of a man who did not know when his number
would come up?
CHAPTER ONE
I
was told to keep a journal.
Old
Gregory said it would help fight loneliness and seclusion. I guess giving it a
try is not any worse than anything else.
My
name is Jonas. And as far as I can remember, I’ve lived on this island. Old
Gregory said he found me on an abandoned ship some twelve years ago. He’s
practically raised me since we’re the only ones living here.
Now
don’t go asking where exactly is “here” because I don’t have a single idea. The
only answer old Gregory has ever served me to the “where are we?” question is “at
the end of the world”.
Some
days, I believe him…
It puts a warm smile on my face to hear that your inspiration came back to you. Great job with finding music that inspires you!
ReplyDeleteYour excerpt set a really nice atmosphere and mood for the beginning of the story - everything feels empty, mostly gray fog, without any sounds of life (wild or otherwise). it makes it more mysterious!
And I love the line "at the end of the world" - I already want to know more about what this place is and who Jonas might be. You got my attention girl!
Aaaaw gee thanks so much!
DeletePuts a warm smile on my face too to be able to write again, believe me! :D hihi
I'm SO happy you like my excerpt! Hopefully, I'll be able to write it just right ^_^
Got the song playing on Repeat here (sorry neighbors lol)
I'll keep posting pieces of it here! ^_^ xx
Yay for renewed inspiration! (And Nightwish is always brilliant for that!) Loved the excerpt too -- very sensual! Thanks for sharing!!
ReplyDeleteHi Esme!! Glad to see you're back again! :D
DeleteAaaw thanks so much about your comment!!
:O You like Nightwish too?! Awesome! ^_^
And thanks so much about your comment on my excerpt! <3
Talk to you again soon! xx